The World, Our World

It has water,
it has lands.
Full of slaughter,
By our hands.
Earth is our planet,
Earth is our home.
We should protect it,
as the past has not shown.
Flowers dying everywhere,
birds and animals are gone.
Because of pollution in the air,
the world is all wrong.
Let’s live on the planet peacefully,
Let’s not destroy it.
We’ll use everything sensibly,
and fix everything bit by bit.

Saanvi Dewan

She is a budding writer, poet and artist, all of 9 years. She is a dreamer and a firm believer that everything in this world is beautiful. She loves nature and wants to save mother earth from all the wrong that we have done. She loves to talk and very sensitive. Whatever she can’t express in words comes out in the form of poems and stories.

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Saanvi Dewan

She is a budding writer, poet and artist, all of 9 years. She is a dreamer and a firm believer that everything in this world is beautiful. She loves nature and wants to save mother earth from all the wrong that we have done. She loves to talk and very sensitive. Whatever she can’t express in words comes out in the form of poems and stories.

One thought on “The World, Our World

  • 10 Jan 2019 at 4:15 PM
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    A poem that is simple yet contains a strong message addressed to every human inhabitant of this planet. For a 10-year-old girl, this poem shows her great potential. Written in plain language,which is one of the essentials in writing poetry, the thoughts embedded in the poem are deep. However, there are lines that, if rephrased would make the poem powerful. These lines are “as the past has not shown” and “the world is all wrong”.

    Keep penning your thoughts, young lady.

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