Prompt: Vos (Two)

2nd Point of View

If you are a fiction writer you are definitely familiar with the first and third point of views. If you are a business writer, a blogger or a copywriter, you are definitely hand in hand with the second point of view. While the former POV’s are common and ‘easier’ to employ in fiction writing, the latter somehow needs a little more push. So here were are, pushing you to get out of your comfort zone and try the second point of view in your narrative.

Well, have you noticed that we just used the second point of view in the above paragraph? Of course, you did! And you can easily tell the narrative voice by looking at the pronouns used:

First POV uses I.

Second POV uses you.

Third POV uses he/she/they.

  • Weave a tale, in a genre of your choice, that uses the second narrative voice. This POV must comprise at least 80% of your story. (Head on to the thread of this post on our FB Group for an enlightening discussion, if any.) 
  • Send in your entries to penmagica@gmail.com as an attachment in a word document (.doc/.docx) along with a 2-3 line bio (not required if previously sent) and a cover picture for your story (optional).
  • The subject of your mail should be “Entry for #Vos″ (compulsory).
  • Along with your entry please send a suggested cover for your story (LANDSCAPE ONLY, as direct attachment, and no watermark, please). Use pixabay.com, pexels.com or unsplash.com to source lovely covers. In case your story is unaccompanied by a cover, it will delay the publishing process.


  1. The submitted story must be between 2500-3500 words (each). Entries lower than or exceeding the word limit will stand disqualified for the event. (Penmancy Tip: Use https://wordcounter.io/ to check your word count.)
  2. There is no limit to the number of entries you may submit- though only the first one of them will be eligible for the contest.
  3. Previously published or plagiarised works will not be considered for contention. The writer of such content stands to be disqualified for the next Penmancy event.
  4. Stories found to have been shared on another writing platform or blog before the declaration of results stand disqualified from the event. Kindly check the Terms of Use for details.
  5. In case a story is received after the submission deadline, it shall be considered as a guest entry and shall not qualify for the contest.

Winning criteria:

  • The winner will be chosen on the basis of the judges’ scores (out of 10)
    • plot/story/creativity (15 points)
    • language/grammar (10 points)
    • narrative voice & content (9 points)
    • emotional impact, (8 points)
    • use of prompt/theme (8 points) 
  • The entries adjudged by a panel of judges and event organisers shall be binding. Judges’ scores to be deemed final and may not be contested or sought from the Penmancy team.
  • All writers are required to read and comment on 5 stories other than their own and encourage their fellow writers with valuable and constructive inputs. Comments like “nice”, “good work”, “brilliant piece”, etc. do not provide the necessary critique and are not helpful for anyone.
  • Only stories that garnered an average score/rating of 7.5 and above, as aggregated on judges’ scores, shall be eligible for winning. 
  • Contest duration:
    • The submission for the contest is open from October 1 to October 31, 2022
    • Results for the event shall be shared on November 7, 2022, at 8:00 pm

Top three winners will receive a copy of the book ‘Murder in the Bylanes: Life and Death in a Divided City’ by Aloke Lall, Maanas Lall.

This book was extended for #BookNook Gift-a-book program by the author.

For questions related to the rules and criteria, please write to us at penmagica@gmail.com or through the Contact Us section on the website.

Here are the submitted stories for the event:


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